Tuesday, June 15, 2010

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Athani peru suman...thana peru sujana

Suman 24yrs abbai...thanaku chinnapude accident lo kanti chupu poyindi.. ..ade accident lo thana parents kuda chanipoyaru..
appati nunchi lyf lo kastaalu paduthunee brathakadam alavaatu cheskunnadu... eppatikaina thanaku kallu vasthayani 10yrs nunchi eduruchusthune unnadu...
thana relatives kuda suman ni veedo pedda shani la daapurinchaadu manaku..amma nannalatho paatu veedu kuda chachinte bavundedhi ani suman munde thittesevaru..kaani emi cheyaleni paristhithi....suman ..okkade thanaku thaanu ga brathakadam alavaau cheskunnadu.... 24yrs abbai ante ela undalanukuntaadu..oka bike...manchi dress ..veskoni andarila friends tho thiragaalani aasha...kaani avanni kudaravu athaniki ..Every day edaina pani meeda Road paikosthe evaro okaritho help thiskoni road cross cheyadam..malli kastapadthune intikelladam..e madyalo kindapadatam paiki levadam...
debbalu thaguluthu alane brathikesevaadu...appudapudu chanipovali anukuna kuda ela chanipovalo kuda telidu.....badha tho intlone kurchoni edchevaadu....ala thana life lo 10yrs nunchi enno dayz...everyday oka scale tho line geesaka ade line vellali annatlu daily ade routine pani...apudapudu chinna pillalu kuda suman mundu emi raakunna car car ani aravadam ..suman ki kaallu addu petti kinda padeyadam ...chaala edipinchevallu....adi chusi akkadunna vallantha navve vaalu...thana chuttu unnavallantha thanani chusi jaali padevalu kaadu...papam suman...prathi daaniki chaala bhayapadevaadu...thanu bayapadakunda unde oke oka place thana chinna room andulone happy ga undevadu...
idi suman 10yrs ga kallu lekunda anubhavisthunna life

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ika ammai gurinchi..thana Peru sujana ..oka andamaina telivaina ammai...
evariki ye kastam vachina thattukoledu...thanu character gurinchi cheppalante evaraina chinna pillalu begging cheyadam kanipisthe chaalu..Vallani thiskelli anadasramam lo cherpinchi mari vache ammai...endukante thanu kuda oka aanadha...thanani kuda evaro aasramam lo cherpincharu.. Kastapadi chadivi....manchi job chesthu...single Thana kaaalla meeda thanu nilabadatam nerchukundi....



Ippati varaku villiddariki okarante okariki telidu....iddaru vere vere Oorlalo unnaru.... kaani evarevarini ela Kalapaalo devudu munde raasipettintaademo kada..alane valliddarini kuda raasi pettesaademo... suman Unna Oorlone thanaku transfer ayyindi... suman untunna inti daggare thanu kuda oka house rent ga thiskundi....okaroju suman inti nunchi baitikochadu...appudu konthamandi allari pillalu..suman vachedi chusi..suman velle daarilo...gaaju penkulu vestharu...ade daarilo ah roju sujana kuda vasthundi....ah pillalu...suman ni edipinchadam chusi...gattiga arusthundi...ventane ade pillalatho ah penkulu thiyinchesthundi....ah Roju 1st tym sujana voice vinnaadu...ventane sujana ku thanx cheppi alane needananga mundukellipothadu..kaani mind lo matram evaraa ani alochinchukuntuu vellipothadu...

konni dayz tarvtha suman Road cross cheyadam kosam...evaraina help chestarani akkade aagi wait chesthunnadu...malli ade voice “hi andi bavunnara” ani..evaru meeru ani suman adagagane ...sujana nenandi ah roju meeru naku thanx cheppaaru gurthu lena...ani thana gurinchi cheppindi..peru sujana ..ikkadiki kottaga vachanu ani....meru road cross cheyala nen help chesta ani suman chei pattukuntundi..10 yrs ga thanani chaalamandi chei patkoni road cross cheyinchaaru..appudemi anipinchaledu....kaani sujana pattukogaane...edo teliyani feelin..
chaala happy ga feel ayyaadu.. :)

suman ni thana inti daggari varaku thiskellindi... jagrattaga undandi ...ani chaala careful ga cheppi mari vellindi...suman daaniki chinna pillodila thalupi vellipoyaadu...
tarvta sujana suman ki kanipinchaledu...nijam cheppalante thanaku assalu evaru kanipincharu kada..juz thana voice matrame vini gurthupattali...kaani enduko...thana gurinche aalochinchevaadu...konni dayz tarvtha malli ade voice “hi bagunnara “ ani...
suman venatene happy ga “ha bavunnanandi...meerela unnaru ani matladukuntuu velthunnaru..
sujana ventene “meerekkadiki velthunnaru ani aduguthundi” daaniki suman ikkada daggarlo temple undi akkada kurchuntaanu...akkada naaku chaala nachuthundi...akkade ekkuva sepu untanu ani chepthadu....sujana apudu nen kuda ravocha ani aduguthundi...iddaru kalisi temple veltharu..akkada chaala sepu kurchoni matladukuntaaru...
suman sujana ni meeru repu kuda vasthara ani aduguthaadu...sujana ventane “ha vastanandi “ antundi...daaaniki suman ventane “ nannu meeru andi ani pilavakandi....suman ani pilavandi ani chepthadu”
daaniki sujana kuda meeru kuda sujana ani pilavandi ani chepthundi....tarvtha iddaaru temple nunchi bayalderuthaaru....
nxt day...marusati roju...tarvta daily meet avvadam...kalavadam...ila konni dayz tarvtha iddaru manchi frs avthaaru
suman ni thana inti daggara vallu edipinchadam thittadam anni...chusthune undedhi...okaroju suman ni adigesthundi...neeku kanti chupu ela poyindi ani....apudu suman accident ..thana parents ...thana relatives anni chepthaadu....adi vinna sujana chaala feel avthundi...adi vini inni yrs intha bhadanu anubhavisthunava ani chaala badhapadthundi...
ah roju suman chei thiskoni..thanaku promise chesthundi... “nenu neetho unnantha varaku ninnu happy ga unchuthaanu....okavela nenu lekunte naatho paatu nee bhadalanni thiskelthaanu antundi”
suman ku thanu cheppindi sariga ardamavvadu...kaani chaala happy ga feel avthadu... thananu preminchadam kuda start chesthadu...epudu suman thana gurinche alochinchevaadu....epudu sujana voice vindama ani eduruchusthuuu undevaadu....every day temple lo meet aye vallu...sujana ofc ayyaka direct ga temple velli suman tho matladedhi....

needananga sujana suman gurinchi complete ga telsukuntundi...suman ela undalanukunnadu...em kavalanukunnadu...anni anni telusukuntundi...suman antha cheppevaadu...sujana daggara matram bhayapadakunda matladevaadu... konni dayz tarvtha suman ni theatre ki thiskelthundi...chiranjeevi movie ...endukante suman ki chiranjeevi ante chaala istam ...kaani chudaledu...apudu suman aduguthadu sujana ni ...ipudu cenima enduku pilchukochav..nakem kanipisthundani thiskochav ani..
sujana nu mvi chudu...dailogs vinu kavalante nen explain chestha le antundi....alane apuduapudu konni scenes kuda chepthundi : ) adi suman ki diff experience thana life lo ala chusthadanukoledu...
suman ki sujana meeda prema marintha perigipothundi....time ki thinnada leda anni sujana ne chuskunedi..apudapudu suman room ki kuda vachedi sujana...suman room lo thana parents photo.. Father dairy dorukuthundi ..ah dairy mottam suman gurinche untundi...suman ni ala chudali ila chudali...raajala penchali...dairy mottam ededo plans..lekkalu avi ivi chusthundi....adi chusi ipudu suman unna position chusi chaala bhadapadthundi...ade dairy lo suman date of birth chusthundi...thana bday inko 2dayz lo undani telusthundi...anthe edo telini happiness elagaina sare suman bday baaga celebrate cheyali ani decide avthundi...suman thana parents unnapudu celebrate cheskune vaadu... kaani parents poyaka kastale thappa happy ga undi ledu..

sujana chaala alochinchindi ela celebrate cheyali thana bday ani...ah 2dayz suman ki kanipinchaledu...correct suman bday roju morning suman ni kalusthundi suman ki telidu thana bday ani...sujana pada temple veldam ani suman ni pilchukelthundi.. akkada thana peru meeda archana cheyisthundi...suman ku em ardam kaadu..tartha Oo anadhasramaniki thiskelthundi..akkada chinna pillalantha vachi suman ki birth day wishes cheptharu.... suman ki thana bday ani apudu telusthundi.. tarvtha sujana pillala madya cake cutting suman tho cheyisthundi...andari chappatla madya wishes chepthu chaala baaga celebrate chesthundi sujana.... suman kallallo kannillu aagavu...ventane akkade kurchoni sujana chei patkoni edchesthaadu... endukante inni yrs suman bday celebrate cheskoledu...asalu thana bday epudo thanake telidu...alantidi...sujana thana bday roju intha baaga celebrate chesindi ani happy ga feel avthadu...

sujana suman ki oka cel phone birth day gift ga isthundi...andulo only sujana n.o matrame save chesthundi...thanaku suman ela cal cheyaalo...antha clear ga explain chesthundi.."ipudu suman life lo thanentha imp ayindante..thanu lekunda okka day kaadu okka second kuda undaledu...kaani suman ki telusu...sujana laanti manchi ammaiki suman correct kaadani...”adokka vishayam lone chaala badha padthuuu untadu...anduke ah vishayam thanalone daachukuntaadu.. okaroju suman sujana tho naaku okka kashanam kallunte bagundu anipisthundi...ninnu okkasari chudalani undi..ani chepthaadu..alane thanalo unna badhantha chepthadu...thanani ..valla relatives entha baadha pedthunaro...enni matalantunnaro...anni cheppi badhapadthaadu...deeniki oke okka reason thanaku kallu lekapodame...ani cheppi feel avthadu..sujana ventane em kaadu neeku kallochesthai appudu anni chudochu....neeku nachinattu cheyochu...antundi...


suman nijanganaa ani aduguthaadu...sujana nijam antundi..alane okavela neeku kallosthe emchestav ani aduguthundi...daaniki suman..""naku kallosthe 1st ninne chusthanu..neeku emkavalante adi nene thiskosta...ninnu evaraina emaina ante vallani kottestaa...neeku chinna kastam vachina nene deggarundi nee kastanni thirusta.. neetho kalisi ipudu nenem thirigaano..manam roju kurchoni matladukune place ..temple alane na bday wish chesina chinnapillalani andarini chustanu...”””...apudu sujana ventane anni nakosamena ..neekosam emcheskova kalloste ani aduguthundi...suman ventane naaku bike ante chaala istam..na chinnapudu na pakkana okathanu bike super ga nadipevaadu...appatlone bike kavalani tega edchevadni...ma father tho anevadni naaku bike kavali ani .ma daddy nu peddayyaka konista ra anevaadu...oka vela naaku kallosthe entha kastamaina sare bike konukkuntaa
ninnu daily ofc daggara vadili pedtha..malli vachi pickup cheskuntaa...ila cheppukuntuuupothune unnaadu.....sujana ku avanni vini kallallo nillu thiruguthai..
thanalo thane neeku kallunte entha bavundedhi suman anukuntundi...iddaru intikeltaru...intlo sujana suman gurinche alochisthu kurchunedi... okaroju hospital ki suman ni tiskelthundi..suman ni baita kurchobetti chaalasepu doc thone personal ga matladthundi...last lo doc vachi suman ni test chesthadu..malli sujana thone matladthaadu..
iddaru hospital nunchi veltharu..suman sujanani aduguthadu ..emannaru doc ani..sujana ventane emanaledu neeku kallu vasthayannaru kaani time padthundata annaru anthe antundi..kaani suman ki edo doubt vasthundi...kaani thananemi adagadu...malli valla routine life ..vallu daily kurchoni matladukune place ..ala valliddari alane nadusthundi..kaani
sujana matram thanokkate hospital ki appudapudu vellochedi..ah vishayam suman ki cheppedi kaadu...
suman manchithanam..thana amayakathvam ..avanni chusi needananga suman ni sujana kuda love chesthundi...kaani thanu kuda suman ki cheppadu...ala okarikokaru cheppukoru...
sujana matram ofc lo overtime wrk chesedi money kosam....suman ki ivanni telidu...kaani sujana matram suman kosam chaala ekkuvaga kastapadedhi....thana sal + overtime money antha save chesedi.. suman chaala badhapadevadu..sariga sujana matladatam ledu ani kaani sujana antha heavy wrk chesi kuda suman tho daily phone lo matladedhi..kaani sariga meet ayyedi kaadu....sujana suman ni entha love chesthundante suman kuda sujanani anthaga love cheyaledemo annanthaga love chesthundi..thanakosame chaala kastapadedhi....tarvtha malli suman 1st lo ela undo ala untundi...okaroju suman ki cal chesthundi..inti daggara ready ga undu..nenochesthunna manam kurchune place ki veldam antundi..
suman happy ga feel ayi thanakosam wait chesthuuu untaadu...thanochesthundi..iddaru kalisi vallu kalusukune place ki veltharu...akkade kurchunnaka...sujana suman chei patkuntundi ..”thana cheyi patkoni...neeku konni dayz lo kallosthunnai antundi...suman ki emardam kaadu...nijangana ani amayakanga aduguthadu...sujana avunantundi..suman moham lo unde anandam chusi...sujana chinna pillalaaa edchesthundi...suman kuda chinna pillodila edchesthadu..navvuthadu...chinnapillodila edgiriganthesthadu..kinda padthaadu lesthadu...thana anandanni chusi sujana enthaga anandapadthundante “thana kosam thanu kuda anthala anandapadaledu ” iddaru chaala sepu akkade untaaru...suman sujana chei patkoni...nijanga naaku kallosthaya ani malli aduguthaadu..sujana avunu suman ninnu 2dayz lo doctor thiskurammannadu antundi..
suman sujana chei patkoni repu manam malli ide place ki vaddamaaa ani aduguthaadu...sujana sare antundi...chikati padthundi iddaru anandanga intikeltharu...suman sujana ku intikellaka cal chesthadu...sujana ni “idokkaroju naatho night antha matladthavaaa ani aduguthaadu..” sujana sare antundi... nijam cheppalante sujana manasulo kuda suman thone undalani untundi...ah roju night antha chaala sepu matladukuntaru....sujana suman cheppe matalu vintune untundi...
next day iddaru vallu daily kalisi kurchunna place lo velli kurchuntaaru...sujana eroje aakari day repati nunchi neeku kotta life antundi..suman kuda avunu...daanikosame eduruchsthunna idokkaroje nen kallu lekunda ikkada neetho undedhi.. naaku kallochaka kotta life ...anni chudagalanu...neetho ippati varaku emem thirigaano avanni kallochaka chusthaanu ani chaala anandapadthaadu....iddaru chaala sepu akkade untaru....kallochaka...suman emem chesthado avanni chepthuuu unte sujana alane vintune untundi...ala chaala sepu kurchuntaaru...ika sujana veldam pada repu thondaraga hospital vellali kada ani iddaru naduchukuntuuu velthaaru...
sujana suman ni thana intlo vadili petti...sujana thana intiki vellipothundi..
suman matram ah roju nyt antha anandanga evevo alochisthuuu...kallochaka nenu sujana ni chusthanu...ika life long sujana thone undipothaaa ani .. nyt antha sujana gurinche nyt antha alochisthuuu anandanga untaadu......

ika sujana thana intikellina marukshanam mundu chaala anandanga untundi suman ki kanti chupu vachesthundi ani.. kaani sudden ga okkasariga gattiga edchesthundi...ah nyt antha thanu edusthunee untundi...
okapakka kallu vasthunnai ani suman aananda padthunte....inko pakka sujana kallallo matram kannillu aagavu....ah nyt antha edusthunee untundi... sujana ah roju nyt oka letter rasi pedthundi....
ika nxt day....suman ready ga thayarayyi...chuttu pakkana unna vallandarini pilichi mari naaku kanti chupu vachesthundi..nen kuda meela chudagalanu ani chepthuu anandapadthuu untaadu...sujana adantha dooram nunchi chusthune untundi...sujana suman chei patkuntundi....anthe ala “thana chei thagalagaane suman lo okkasariga anandam ah chei sujana de gurthu pattestadu...ventane sujana ani pilusthadu...sujana ela kanukkunnav suman..prathisari correct ga ela chepthunnav ani aduguthundi..daaniki suman navvuthaadu” anthe iddaru kalisi temple veltharu....suman peru meeda archana cheyisthundi sujana...akkadi nunchi iddaru hospital veltharu...ala velthunna iddaru..okarikokaru matladukoru....iddaru evariki vallu...valla paatha gnapakaalanu gurthu techukuntuu untaaru

suman thanu padina kastaalu... tarvtha sujana raavadam..help cheyadam ...frs avvadam..bday celebrate cheyadam...chiranjeevi mvi ....anandasramam....iddaru kalisi prathi roju oke place lo kurchoni matladukodam anni okkokkatiga suman ki gurthosthuuu untai..
ika sujana...thanu kuda thanu ela kastapadi paikochindo..thanu inthakalam evaru lekunda ela brathikindoo..tharvatha suman parichayam...suman manchi thanam...manchi friends avvadam...ala thanu kuda antha gurthu techukuntuu untundi..
ala iddaru hospital daggariki vachestharu...
sujana suman ni nu ikkade undu nen doc tho matladostha ani..lopalikelthundi....suman sare ani wait chesthaadu.. konchepayyaka sujana vachi suman mundu kurchuntundi..
suman tho “ chudu suman..oka 3dayz nuv hospital lone undali...tavta neku operation chesthaaru..anthavaraku ikkade undali..antha docs chuskuntaaru...nenu office pani meeda vere Oorikelthunna ....10dayz lo vachestha nenoche lopala neeku kallochesthai antundi...”

apudu suman nu lekunda 10dayz undala ...inthavaraku epudu lenu...elanti time lo nuvvunte bavuntundi sujana ani chepthadu...malli thanalo thane sujana ni ibbandi pettakudadhani...neeku urgent aythe velli thondaraga vachesei...nenu 1st nine chudali antaadu..
Sujana kallolla kannilu aagavu...suman ki ah vishayam telika..Chepthunee untaadu..
sujana suman ni patkoni sudden ga nuduti paina muddu petkuntundi...suman ekkado edo bayam ..Duramavthunda emaina thanu ani...kaani silent gane untaadu...
sujana suman ni join cheyinchi...ika velthanu ani cheppi vellipothundi...suman ki edo feelin thanu doooranga vellipothunda ani enduko thanaku alane anipishundi..

suman hospital lo join avthadu...2dayz lo operation untundi...anthavaraku observation lo undali ani chepthadu...kaani suman manasantha sujana meede untundi okkasari thanatho matladaali ani thapana paduthuu untaadu....2dayz lo 1day aypothundi.. suman manasantha sujana meede untundi...epudu vasthunda ani eduruchusthune untaadu...2dayz aypothundi..doc suman daggarikochi eroje neeku operation...adi ayyaka 20dayz tarvtha kanti chupu vasthundi ani chepthaadu...
suman operation aypothundi...suman unconscious lo untadu...1week ayipothundi...suman thanakosam eduruchusthune untaadu...thanu raadu...20dayz avthundi sujana raadu..doc suman daggarikochi eroje neeku kallakunna katlu vipputhaamu ani chepthadu.. kaani mundu suman sujana ni chudalanukuntaadu....ventane suman doc ni inko 2dayz aagi thana kallaku unna katlani vippagalara doc ani adugthaadu..doc daaniki kudaradu...eroje thiyaali kallu sariga kanipisthunnayo ledo chudali memu ani doc chepthaadu..suman kallakunna katlu needananga vipputhuu untaadu...needananga kallu theru ani doc antaadu...suman needananga kallu terusthadu...mundu antha masaka masakaga kanipisthundi...tarvta clear ga kanipisthundi...suman ika anni chudagaladu ...suman anandaniki anthe undadhu.... kaaani sujana ekkadundi..ani okate alochana...thana ph cal chesthadu...kaani cel switch off ani vasthundi...elagaina vasthundi kada ani hosp lone untaadu...oka roju doc suman ni pilusthadu... suman doc daggarikelli sujana ekkadundi doc ..eppatiki thanu vasthundi thanakosame waitin doc....naaku kallu kanipisthunnai ante thana chaala anandapadthundi..epudepudu thananu chudala ani chachipothunna doc ani..thanatho nen thiragalsina places chaala unnai doc ..epudosthundi thanu...okate continue ga matladuthune untaadu....enti doc em matladaru thanu meetho matladedhi kada...thaneppudosthundooo meeku cheppe untundi kada doc ani aduguthaadu...
“ Doc suman ki nammaleni nijanni chepthadu...adi

“ sujana Oka cancer patient ...ah vishayam sujana ki kuda telusu...thanu 3mnths lo chanipothundane vishayam kuda telusu..kaani thanu evariki cheppaledu.
Konni rojule brathukuthundani thanaku telsu...kaani neeku cheppaledu...
Ninnu oka roju hospital thiskochindi telsa...ah roju neeku kanti chupu vasthundo raado ani adagadaaniki kaadu... thanu enni dayz brathukuthundo adagadaaniki vachindi.. alane thana kalluuu neeku ivvadaaniki ready ayindi....thanu chanipoye mundu thana kallu neeku set avthaya ani adigindi..apudu nen appatike nu cancer last stage lo untav...ah tym ne body lo ye part evariki panikiraavu ani cheppaanu..thanu apudu ventane 2mnths munde na kallu thanaku iste thanaku kanti chupu vasthunda ani adigindi..nen vasthundani cheppaanu... apude telisindi...thanu 3mnths lo chanipothundani telsina...apudu thana kallu neeku paniki raavani munde thanaku telusu anduke 2mnths munde neeku thana kallu ichesindi... suman adantha vini barinchaledu...doc ni sujana ekkadundi ani aduguthaadu..
Appudu Doc “ sujana 10dayz back chanipoindi ani chepthadu” anthe suman nooooo ani gattiga arichesthadu...doc ni patkoni gattiga edchesthadu...kaani emcheyaleni paristhithi...
sujana ante suman ki antha istam... doc suman ki oka letter istaadu...”
thadichina thana kallatho ah letter thiskuntaadu suman..barinchaleni baadha...
Kanti chupu vachaka mundu thanane chudalanukunna suman....ipudu sujana kallathone sujana ni chudalekapoyaadu.. ah baadha tho ah letter thisi chusthaadu


Ah letter lo


"" Sumannnnnnn...... ela unnav ipudu ...neeku kanti chupu vachesindi kada...naaku chaala anandanga undi ...nu ipudu anni chudagalav...evaru ninnu edipinchaleru...evari help kosam nuv wait cheyalsina avasaram ledu... neeku bike ante istam kada..anduke neekosam office lo over time wrk chesi bike konnanu..nu intikellesariki inti mundu untundi....manam vellina places anni nuv ipudu chudochu...manam rooju kurchunna matladukunna place undi kada adi kuda nu chudochu kaani esari nenundanu..ayina parledu neeku kanti chupu kanipisthundi kada adi chaalu naaku....



Sumann...eduposthundi raaa...eduposthundi...kallu lekunda undatam intha kastamaa..andulonu ninnu chudakunda undalante inka kastanga undi raaa...ninnu chudalani undi raaa...kaani e janma ku adrustam ledu naaku..
Nee kallallo nunchi okka kanniti chukka kuda raakudadhu endukante avi na kallu gurthunchuko... na kallatho nu prapanchanni chusthunnav chaala happy ga undi...
Ika velthanu... epati nuncho neeko maata cheppalanukunna ... i love you suman..
E kallu leni Danni love chesthavaa...suman "
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Adantha chadivina suman okkasariga kinda padipothadu...sudden ga silent aypothaadu...okkade naduchukuntuu hospital baitikostadu...andaru manushule kaani sujana undadhu.... kanti chupu lenapudu evar leru sujana undi chaalu anukunnadu..ipudu andaru unnaru..andaru kanipisthunnaru kani sujana ledu.....
Direct ga sujana suman kalisina temple velthadu.. vallu kurchune place ni gurthu pattaledu... antha confusion ventane kallu musukuntaadu...kallu lenivaadilane velthaadu..apudu correct ga thanu kurchunna place ki velli kurchuntadu ...okkasariga kallu terichi chusthadu...akkade undipothaadu...ah rojantha ...okkade thana alaochanalu..thana gnapakaalu anni gurthu cheskuntuuu narakam anubhavisthaadu...akkade edchesthadu..
Sujana nuv lekunda nenela brathakaali ani gattiga edchesthadu...nu raaaa please ani ..

Malli ventane ivi sujana kalllu ..ah kallallo nunchi kannillu raakudadhu ani kallu thuduchukoni..manasulonebadhapadthuuu...intikelthaadu...intikellagaane thana mundu bike untundi...







kaani silent gane intikelli addam lo thana kallanu chuskuntaadu...thanu sujana tho emcheppalanukunna ...addam lone thana kallaku cheppukune vaadu..

Ala Sujana starting lo ““nenu neetho unnantha varaku ninnu happy ga unchuthaanu....okavela nenu lekunte naatho paatu nee bhadalanni thiskelthaanu”
Anna maatalu suman ki appudu ardamavthaayi...adi munde telisinte suman “nuv naatho unte chaalu...enni bhaadaalaina anubhavista ani cheppevademo..”

Ala suman jeevithantham ...thanu sujana kurchunna place lo rooju velli kurchune vaadu...sujana la evarikaina prob vasthe ventane help chesevaadu...kaani eppatiki ennatiki sujana ni marchipodu...thana gnapakaalu eppatiki marchiponivvavu...


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31 comments:

  1. wooooh..Tragedy..ga..undi...but..its..nice..edupuvasthundi..ammo..papam..suman..sujana character kekaaaaaaa assalu

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  2. nizam ga naku kuda edupochindi :( .

    starting lo konchem amavasya chandrudu mv gurthochina.. sujana vachaka total maaripoindi..

    nice story.. touching one :)

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  3. @ suppi....Thanks :)


    edchesav kada...
    rase tym lo nen kuda edchesa..anduke endin alane unchesaanu...

    actual ga 3 endings anukunna e stry ki...but final ga ide pettesaanu :(

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  4. boss stryy sooper undhii baa touching undhii :)

    but...starting konni lines nd sujana entry chadvaka the story becomes predictable :(

    nxt time rasethappudu see that it is not predictable :)

    A very good attempt :)

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  5. hey really heart touching charan [:)]

    chala baga rasavu nenu edichesanu [:(]

    All the best keep on writing [:)]

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  6. Hai...Rinku...

    Really a nice story...It resembled many stories..anyhow a very good attempt...It resembled a song which goes with the same story line...

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  7. chala heart touching one.... simply superb [:)]

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  8. annayyaa edipinchesavu kadha nijanga.. :(
    chala bagundhi ra storyy....bale rasav... :)
    Inka manchi manchi stories rayi.....
    chalaa touchin ga vundhi....tooo gud annayyaa :)

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  9. story chala bagundi..!! koncham reapted story la anipinchina., the way u xplained it., so nice...


    koncham lenghthy ga anipinchidi., i mean chadavadaniki chala time pattindi., pfcrse aa feel ravalante., aa matram lenth undali...
    comment ee intha length rasthunte., story antha rayadam thappuledanipithundi..!!!


    so nice., common gane unna., heart touching rasavu brother..!!

    keep going..!!
    all the bst..!!
    :)

    #KRISHNA#

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  11. Boss, Story bavundhi, kani predictable.
    narration was good. but can be better.
    konni lines chala bavunnay.
    keep posting. :)

    later,
    KC.

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  12. hmm annayya chala bavundi, bless u poddunne manchi feelin ichinanduku

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  13. hey ThanQ All :)

    Krishna annaya...nu cheppindi nijane stry peddaga aypoindi..kaani nenem cheyalenu...naku stry edi cut cheyalanipinchaledu....anduke alane unchesaanu

    thanQ annaya...max Chaala mandiki nene chudamani chepthunna kaani..neeku nuvve chusi Comment chesav Love U annaya :P :)


    @KC ThanQ Boss... :)

    paddu ..manasa...sailu ...bunny boss...andariki ThanQ so much...hmm esari Inka baaga rayadaniki try chesta :)

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  14. hey really heart touching rinku ....
    simply superb
    ur narration was good

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  15. Rinku chala bagundiii :)
    A feel ni miss kakunda rasavu :)
    Common language lo rasesavu kani konni chotla konni konni words mistakes unayi anpinchndi

    A doctor em jargindho cheptadu ga akada chepinde cheptunatu undindhi knchm edit ceyalsindi :)

    edo naku anpinchndi chepa but overall ga awesome :)
    andariki next em jargutundo telsipotadi kani a a feel ni overall ga carry forward cheyagalgadam chala great :)

    Keep posting :)
    Esari konchem chinnadi rayava :P

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  16. hi rinku...

    well story lo.. vala edaru midha okariki okaru chupi prema chala bagundhi.. nijaniki ala oka amai & abai undatam chala baguntundhi.

    Sujana role chala pleasent ga undhi.. ani suman kosame ani thanu chesthuna over time, thana happy ga undali ani cheysi prayathanam matram amogham !!

    Suman.. umm ela chepali.. papam antha gadanga preminchaka, thanu lekunda ela untado.. aa badhani ela baristhunado anipisthundhi..

    okarikosam okaru.. intha andamain prema mugimpu happy ending vachi unte entha bagundeydho asalu...

    nice story Rinku !!
    Inko stroy mali inko step veyali ani korukuntuna !!

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  17. Rinku I have 1 doubt...

    2 mnths mundhe isthundhi kada thana eyes. Kani sujana chanipoyedhi 3 mnths lo.. kani suden ga thanu ela chanipothundhi....

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  18. chinna thanQ boss :)


    but nu adigina Dbt ki ans ante cheppadam kastam :P

    hmm 3manths lo chanipothundi ani cheppadu doc..dat means 3mnths lopala epudaina ani...correct 3mnths ani kaadu :P

    edo ans cheppadaniki try chesa :P

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  19. Story length chudagane mundhu chadhavadaniki bhayamesindhi..but chadhuvthunna koddhi chaaala intresting ga anpinchindhi...veryyy interesting,sacrificing Love story n TRUE LOVE ante ento chaala baaga chepparu...MANAM LEKAPOINA MANAM PREMINCHINA VALU BAGUNDALI..MANA PREMANI BRATHIKINCHALI..Ani last lo conclusion ivvalsindhi..Anyways ur story was awesome...try 2 write more interesting stories like this...ALL DA BEST 4 UR FUTURE LOVELY STORIES...BYEE...

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  20. divya ...thanQ so much...:)

    hmm meeru cheppina conclusion na mind lo apudu raaledu.. :( :P

    thanQ for ur suggestion ..nxt tym edaina manchi stry line vasthe pakka try chestha :)

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  21. hmm rinku..chaala baavundhi story... asalu sujana raasina letter chaduvthunte...gundello edo theleeni badha start ayindhi nijanga jariginattu. Good One.. nope.. really out of the world :)

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  22. chaduvuthuntee naku edupu vachesindhi ....you tube lo same eh lanti video okati vundhi ....reverse kakpothee any way nice story

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  23. chadivaka comment cheyataniki matalu ravatledu....heart entha heavy ga aipoindo...complete ga readers ni grip chesey narration and story...motham meeda racha racha :)

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  24. Wow realy nice story wid simple narration :)

    I love da way u narrated...chandamama buks lo unnantha simple clear narration realy awesum..

    expecting more writings frm your blog...

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  25. Awesome...awesome and awesome..!!!
    chaaalaaaa touching ga raasaru...and the letter...I don't have any to narrate how I felt reading this one..!!!
    Keep writing..!!!
    All the very best...!!!

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  26. hi rinku,
    story is too good.. inta creativity unda miku..
    wow, and the charecters and, the situations between them are so heart touching..
    keep writing. awesome
    --prashanthi(swaru's frnd)

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  27. Last 2 mins nunchi eduposthunee... undhi :(
    Chaala baga rasav... :)

    Xpect chesa.. heroine kallu hero ki isthundhani.. but cancer untundhani xpect cheyyaledhu :)

    Adhi bagundhi... nd emotions.. baga unnay :)
    I'm cryingggg :(((

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